The child I was Was the child I became Sad, silent eyes that I don't remember Showing To myself Or The world My world was small and narrow And surrounded by people that that I liked and even loved However Puzzling they seemed Lots of friends as puzzled as I at this strange World populated by those large, tall and passionless adults, calling the Many words of friendship Not only I mistrusted. We grew together and apart And mourned those we lost in whatever ways, The next generation children of the Generations before And before them. We didn't think to complain No one did then. And now? We finally find, and I hope its not only I, That the freedom We've sought In so many Inappropriate and self- destructive Solutions, began With one small journey That stretches into some far off horizon None of us can see.
I've never tried to edit a poem before, so I hope it has improved the sense of it. I've found that punctuation can improve understanding.