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Jun 2014
They depend on so much to work out
They need faith and trust in each other
It needs believing in anything just about
Help is needed from father and mother
Just to make sure everything is straight
Criticism will always occur in such thing
Certain criticism can actually be great
Because more faith is white it will bring
You can try your hardest just to succeed
I don't think they work out at the very end
There is other necessities that you do need
I don't have anything there to recommend
I learned from experience they tend to fail
Here are a few tips if you choose the risk
If your partner communicates less just bail
Meaning something can no longer be fixed
Remain in contact as much as possible
Try to see each other with some device
Keep your schedule clear and flexible
To talk to the other or you'll pay the price
I don't find them successful but that's me
You may find them amazing and perfect
Mine left me alone but always feeling free
In the end it left me in a disastrous wreck
Brett W
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