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May 2014
he jumped off Golden Gate
they never saw him again.

cracked his skull on the pavement
the boys kept kicking.

blood spilled everywhere
suicide note too soaked to read.

he arrived to the party in a Ford Escort
he left it in an ambulance.
Four stories all based on Ernest Hermingway's Iceberg Theory (or theory of omission). This poem pieces them all together; they are different but they all have a common theme and a common technique.
Simon Obirek
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Simon Obirek  Brooklyn/Denmark
(Brooklyn/Denmark)   
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       Sk Abdul Aziz, PoetryJournal, --- and Peter Jones
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