May 2014
Oh, Romeo. Could thy be lost in depths of tar,
so deep, your embrace is far from clearance of air
your Sadness, by thou’s lost mourning and debt of heart
must not be determinant of thee’s lost wish to depart
so deep, your embrace is far from clearance of air
your Sadness, by thou’s lost mourning and debt of heart
must not be determinant of thee’s lost wish to depart
Could someone tell me if it's properly written in iambic pentameter?
