On the first night that I met you, I went to sleep trying to remember your face, but I could not make it out. The only thing, the only feature that came so vividly to my mind were your lips, beautiful as they are, like I know you are. *Lips that kiss my soul They are the lips I wish to kiss Your lips, So warm that melt my own Lips that whisper to my ear The lips I want to hear Your lips, Lips with which I fall in love The lips worth dying for
This is part of a poem that I'm trying to work on right now. Do you think "lips" get too repetitive? I don;t like that last line. I may end up changing it. -Thanks =)