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Danielle Barlow
Poems
Mar 2014
Something Is Wrong
I’m not sure what I could do
If it were all up to you.
Would you stay or would you go,
Or never even let me know?
Though our love is very strong,
Do you sense that something is wrong?
Do you feel the way I do?
Every time I think of you.
Every day I love you more,
And mores the fear you’ll close this door.
I just don't think you understand
how I see things and where I stand.
I feel like this one could be better. Do any of you have some suggestions?
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Danielle Barlow
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