Feb 2014
I love reading poetry on this site.
The most common used word is love.
Well, actually ambiguous is used a lot. I guess it makes people feel smart about themselves.
Anyway, everyone uses the word 'love', but has anyone experienced it or are we all deluding ourselves?
Besides the point, I've learned that if you want to succeed in writing on this site, you have to make sure you write about how you 'fell' in love and then follow it with 'heartbreak'.
You can be dark, and probably get some 'acclaim' from the broody broods.
Or you can not be completely pretentious and write something genuine.
Good luck, though. They'll call it cliche or cheesy.
So you deal with that...
But first thing is first: You must get artistic.
Do this
because
it some how
makes it look like
you
know
what
you're
doing.
Make sure
you seem like you
DO THIS
for a l
i love you more than i can take
vicious words cause my heart to break
in god we trust our love forever
never be gone from me, oh no, not ever!
good bye my love i'll cherish you... ambiguously
Now let's get wordy.
Let's use some words entirely too much like...
AMBIGUOUS
Then after that, it'll be time to crack open the thesaurus and write words that you're not entirely sure that you're using correctly.
The ambiguous alligator bit with a fervor as the metamorphosis of his analysis changed what he thought (DID YOU SEE WHAT I DID THERE). He was chased by hunters, but was devoid of a cwtch (yeah, that's a word. Maybe he's a welsh alligator. I don't know. Parts of this poem are meant to be...wait for it...ambiguous).
the
alligator's
father
died
in
the
great
alligator wars of 1
9
7
2012 was an okay year, though.
what a tragedy it is to be abstentious at a buffet...(end it ambiguously)
end
Then we have some depressing stuff on this site. Not that there's anything wrong with writing something depressing, but usually it's kind of stuff that you'd read at a seventh grade poetry slam sponsored by Hot Topic and Van's Warped Tour in partnership with AXE Body Spray and Monster Energy Drink.
We'll call this one....
'pain, pain, and more pain'
I knew this girl
name was elle
she rang my heart
like a ******* bell
i was fourteen
she was fine
we had assigned seats next to each other
but her seat was inside of my mind
we talked about deep stuff
like really deep
she told me she had nightmares
and i said i had them too
BUT NOT ALL OF THEM ARE IN MY SLEEP
the real nightmare was that
she had a boyfriend
he treated her really well
but he was a ******* FOOTBALL PLAYER
**** **** **** LOVE IS A ******* HELL
why not me
why the tool
i can play six songs on the guitar
and my parents own a pool
i could have given you everything
i could have given you my heart on a string
but you cut it with your knife
and ******* did it sting
my heart is black
my emotions in a whirl
i'll be like this for two weeks
AT LEAST
until i talk to another girl
I just love some of the poetry I read on this site, and I hope you like mine.
Thanks, guys!
The most common used word is love.
Well, actually ambiguous is used a lot. I guess it makes people feel smart about themselves.
Anyway, everyone uses the word 'love', but has anyone experienced it or are we all deluding ourselves?
Besides the point, I've learned that if you want to succeed in writing on this site, you have to make sure you write about how you 'fell' in love and then follow it with 'heartbreak'.
You can be dark, and probably get some 'acclaim' from the broody broods.
Or you can not be completely pretentious and write something genuine.
Good luck, though. They'll call it cliche or cheesy.
So you deal with that...
But first thing is first: You must get artistic.
Do this
because
it some how
makes it look like
you
know
what
you're
doing.
Make sure
you seem like you
DO THIS
for a l
i love you more than i can take
vicious words cause my heart to break
in god we trust our love forever
never be gone from me, oh no, not ever!
good bye my love i'll cherish you... ambiguously
Now let's get wordy.
Let's use some words entirely too much like...
AMBIGUOUS
Then after that, it'll be time to crack open the thesaurus and write words that you're not entirely sure that you're using correctly.
The ambiguous alligator bit with a fervor as the metamorphosis of his analysis changed what he thought (DID YOU SEE WHAT I DID THERE). He was chased by hunters, but was devoid of a cwtch (yeah, that's a word. Maybe he's a welsh alligator. I don't know. Parts of this poem are meant to be...wait for it...ambiguous).
the
alligator's
father
died
in
the
great
alligator wars of 1
9
7
2012 was an okay year, though.
what a tragedy it is to be abstentious at a buffet...(end it ambiguously)
end
Then we have some depressing stuff on this site. Not that there's anything wrong with writing something depressing, but usually it's kind of stuff that you'd read at a seventh grade poetry slam sponsored by Hot Topic and Van's Warped Tour in partnership with AXE Body Spray and Monster Energy Drink.
We'll call this one....
'pain, pain, and more pain'
I knew this girl
name was elle
she rang my heart
like a ******* bell
i was fourteen
she was fine
we had assigned seats next to each other
but her seat was inside of my mind
we talked about deep stuff
like really deep
she told me she had nightmares
and i said i had them too
BUT NOT ALL OF THEM ARE IN MY SLEEP
the real nightmare was that
she had a boyfriend
he treated her really well
but he was a ******* FOOTBALL PLAYER
**** **** **** LOVE IS A ******* HELL
why not me
why the tool
i can play six songs on the guitar
and my parents own a pool
i could have given you everything
i could have given you my heart on a string
but you cut it with your knife
and ******* did it sting
my heart is black
my emotions in a whirl
i'll be like this for two weeks
AT LEAST
until i talk to another girl
I just love some of the poetry I read on this site, and I hope you like mine.
Thanks, guys!
