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Feb 2014
thoughts constant. never far from my mind.
you. you are inside me.
trying to draw you out like a fish from water
but i’m drowning instead.

first. i am first. on top. top *****.
my dear, don’t you think this is unreal?
metal that melts at my touch.
i can think no further. think nothing of it.

drowning in the midst of a stare. you to me. connected and broke. there is a connection. ///broken. snip.


-i wish he were more persistent-
Deana Luna
Written by
Deana Luna  Seattle, WA
(Seattle, WA)   
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