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The petals in the air

I imagine petals of light pink roses or of cherry blossoms gliding in the air

Slowly, they turn and fall, gliding through the empty space

 

I see a pretty woman, with mesmerizing hair and pretty ears and earlobes, sitting there, in a pink dress and with an elegant white hat

Her hair is pulled back into a knot and she plays with little flowers dancing with the wind

I cannot see her face, but I know that she is beautiful and I know that I feel something for her

Perhaps she has blue eyes and small pink lips

Or possibly she has penetrating dark eyes and luscious lips

 

This woman, is surrounded by the pink petals

Flowing with the gusts of wind that blow the pink dress and white hat

 

Hundreds, thousands of petals that surround her like little butterflies in the time of love,

Turn and swirl freely, spinning vertically and horizontally

They fall and fall, as if from trees atop the clouds that hang above

But then they rise, too, can you see? Rising, flowing, going everywhere with the waves of blowing air

The lady holds her hat and grabs a petal that far-off mountains and the trees, the rivers and the streams, dedicate to her.

The petal, smooth and delicate, a reflection of her tender hands

The petal, pleasantly aromatic like her fragrance

The petal, soft with subtle shades of pink, a reflection of her gentle nature and all things that surround her being

 

Lost in my thoughts, I imagine a fragrant atmosphere, with scent of pink rose petals,

And there, a sweet and pretty woman sits surrounded by floating petals in the air.

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Written by
ovc
Mexican
Published
Dec 5, 2013
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