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Lorraine day
Poems
Nov 2013
Transparent life force
Some people say
I don't believe
In a god above
They can't perceive
They have never seen him
Or heard him speak
They scoff at believers
Consider them weak
They ask for evidence
To show he's there
Doubt why he would love us
Or even care
They say they've prayed
When things got tough
But he never heard
So they had enough
They then believe
When we die that's it
As a loving god
Doesn't seem to fit
Into this world
We dwell within
With hardened hearts
Their life is grim
My answer is ~then this perceive
His presence is transparent
Like the air we breathe
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Lorraine day
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