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Mar 2
You were my world.
All I think about now is how
you used to make me smile.
I drown in my sorrow when
I’m low, and
you were here for me.
If only
You were here all the time.
You said
such sweet things
and threw away
the inner critics haunting us
as you were listening to
how I felt everything was falling apart
how I cared about you and
Me, my words, and
You ignored
my flaws,
picking on
everybody else
hating on
us,
never actually believing in
what others said,
taking in
how I see you now
Truth is
You made me feel so deeply but
that shouldn’t be possible
and all I want is you, though
I must confess, I’m stuck on if onlys
Because unfortunately things have changed,

read the lines from bottom to top
to know more
since this is a reversible poem
Feedback welcome! (This is my first time doing this!)
JayJay
Written by
JayJay  16/Vermont
(16/Vermont)   
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