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Feb 10
When you ask, "Are you in love?" it's not the same
As asking if you love, a feeling known and deep.
You love your family, siblings, kin, and name
The bonds you share, the promises you keep.

But being "in love" is something set apart,
A current running, vibrant, wild, and free.
When nearness makes a race within your heart,
A movie scene of yearning, wild to be.

Their touch, a spark that travels through your core,
A craving, dreaming, longing, ever near.
They fill your thoughts and leave you wanting more,
Each sense, each moment, holding them so dear.

A blurring of the lines where you begin
And they conclude, a merging of two souls.
That intertwined connection deep within,
A love that makes you whole, and makes you bold.

When words feel trapped, a lump within your throat,
A thousand phrases dwindle to one sound.
"I love you" echoes, all you can denote,
A simple truth, profound and all around.

You search for ways to say it, deep and true,
In every language whispered on the breeze.
To let them feel the love that flows from you,
A boundless ocean, deeper than the seas.

This is being "in love," a precious flame,
That flickers softly, needing gentle care.
Don't let routine extinguish its bright name,
But fan the embers, always wanting there.

Desire them always, show them, never cease
To nurture passion, keep it burning bright.
Avoid the mundane, seek joy and inner peace,
And hold onto that love with all your might.
I wrote this today, because I was thinking, no..... feeling like I described above.
I know I say "I LOVE YOU" all the time to my GF, and I strive to tell her things in Chinese'
But I hope you understand.  I don't just LOVE her..... but I am IN LOVE WITH HER.  And I never want that routine, the mundane, the life's chores of family to diminish that aspect..... I want to be "in love" with her for as long as we are together.
I hope that came across correctly.
Liú'Jiāwén   -  刘嘉文
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Liú'Jiāwén - 刘嘉文  57/3rd Rock from the Sun
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