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Jan 1
All free-born and wild

Into field stride
Nature's child
Barefoot run
- a peach
- a pear
- a plum

Bird song
Insect hum
Orchard fun for each
- a pear
- a plum
- a peach

One for each
For bird and bug
And for the child dear
- a peach
- a plum
- a pear

Into fields where
They can eat
Their fill of some
- peach
- pear
- plum
Do you see the difference in this poem from the 1st draft posted?
S R Mats
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S R Mats  F/Houston, TX
(F/Houston, TX)   
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