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The tale of Gael Force and the daring Five

by Scotspoet

Gael force set upon the waves Aboard five daring souls, To sail throughout the western isles On fair winds, their only goals But out to sea, just three days hence They would all be left in awe For waiting for Gael Force and the five Lay the tempests violent and steely maw From Mallaig did the five set out Both spirits and hopes were high “We’ll poke our nose oot” the skipper did cry “At least we will give it a try” The motor on and sails were down they headed out to sea Not knowing what lay just ahead, oblivious as can be Though sea's were rough and waves were high and spray washed over the five They motored on through growing swells not able to come about, through fear for their lives. The course was set, no turning back The five did engage in battle Though fear was seen in all their eyes their determination could not be rattled. The tempest had only just begun to test the daring five A squall it began to spew up, with winds as cold as knives "Starboard Bow" the second mate cried, and all looked right to see A dark grey broiling mass, a towering foaming wall of sea. The helmsman turned into the wave, as Gael Force climbed and climbed and crashing down the other side with a booming sound like thunder wishing and hoping that Gael Force's bow, would not completely go under. Squall upon squall lashed Gael force, with power and steal and fury Skipper shouted out below," Its blowing a bloody Hooley" Hour upon hour the tempest tried to drown the daring five Throwing squalls and hail and towering seas, The crew worked, just to stay alive. Ardnamurchan point did beckon, As towering seas grew higher "Another 5 degrees starboard" navigator called "this is how I reckon" bodies began to tire. A  lighthouse appeared  igniting hope as white horses rode the waves thunderously crashing over the bow to the sea Gael force was a slave Darkness began to fall with no release for the five rounding Ardnamurchan point they sailed for their souls they now did strive. Tossed to starboard and then to port the sailors were worn and battered surely the end was nigh they were all so bloody knackered! With bodies sore and whit's at an end the sea gave up its fight. Gael Force and its daring souls neared the end of their plight. Tobamory bound and surfing the swell the crewmates welcomed the night. The last rope was tied, Gael Force secure The crewmates went below. Hugs and hand shakes, cups of tea and stories told again of how Gael Force and its daring five braved the storm and lived to sail again. The Daring Five were: Robin Mackenzie  Skipper Peter                  First mate Brian Shon       Second Mate Mike McNaughton Crewmate, Helmsman Mark""""""""         Crewmate, Helmsman
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Scotspoet
59 / M / Weston-super-Mare
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Written by
Scotspoet
59 / M / Weston-super-Mare
Published
Dec 11, 2024
Time
5m
Notes

This was a light-hearted poem about how we sailed off the coast of Scotland in a 52 knot gale on a yacht aptly called Gael Force. 12 hours of battle. Names of places are correct but in different order to allow for some rhythm. Read in a Scottish accent if you can. BTW Hooley is a big wind, knackered is very tired lol

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#sailing#galeforcewind#storm#shanty
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