Hello, Poetry?
Classics
Words
Blog
F.A.Q.
About
Contact
Guidelines
© 2024 HePo
by
Eliot
Submit your work, meet writers and drop the ads.
Become a member
VeinsOfInk
Poems
Nov 2
The mouse in my house
I went to the forest near my house,
There I saw a very small mouse.
She followed as I walked back home,
Then she began to roam.
I felt her presence at all times,
Watched as on the bed she climbs.
It was already late,
As I felt my powers fade.
I lay down next to her,
As everything began to blur.
I woke up and knew she was near,
Then I felt blood dripping from my ear.
"Ouch," I said, because it felt like a bite.
What happened in the night?
I searched and searched but couldn’t find,
"Where did she go?" I thought in my mind.
Crossed my arms and felt a spin,
I saw her right under my skin.
Would love any kind of feedback or critic
#dark
#animal
#rhyme
Written by
VeinsOfInk
M
(M)
Follow
😀
😂
😍
😊
😌
🤯
🤓
💪
🤔
😕
😨
🤤
🙁
😢
😭
🤬
0
51
Please
log in
to view and add comments on poems