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Donall Dempsey
Poems
Jun 2024
HER FIRST CAMPING TRIP
HER FIRST CAMPING TRIP
somewhere an owl
gave a hoot
then another
somewhere else a dog
far away barked once
barked twice
a darkness so
dark one could
cut it with a knife
the pop up tent
our only refuge
from this night
it just about
fitted into
the living room
squeezing the telly
into a corner
the **** pile silencing our footsteps
it was her idea
to camp
in the great inside
"Tomorrow we could
try the end of the garden?"
I dared to suggest
"No way!" she was
adamant with all
the authority of a 3 year old
"This is far more
exciting!" and by God
it was
Written by
Donall Dempsey
Guildford
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