Jan 25
A white sand raining
on a beach of an island
in snowy black sea
silver tides cool the heat
as I throw off some snowballs
on a beach of an island
in snowy black sea
silver tides cool the heat
as I throw off some snowballs
Winter's Culmination
When it snows in an exotic island and the heat cools. You got nothing else to do except to throw off the snow from you like snowballs. This poem has 2 things: summer and winter and is also my first tanka.
Syllable Count: 31 ~ lines 5/7/5/7/7 ~ 25 words
When it snows in an exotic island and the heat cools. You got nothing else to do except to throw off the snow from you like snowballs. This poem has 2 things: summer and winter and is also my first tanka.
Syllable Count: 31 ~ lines 5/7/5/7/7 ~ 25 words
