•
So if,
the stance we seek
never faulters
w/ each & every
word we speak,
"forewarning,"
becomes thee epitome
of an act of kindness?
•
There is
wisdom to be had
enduring life's tests
brutally confronted
resolving impediments
—the "hard" way.
•
Although,
just a single
unheeded remittal
deemed too insignificant
-beyond noncommittal-
until interim's transmittal
[ until interim had dwindled ]
found idle & dwindled
[ docilely ]
any chance toward a repass/
can this recourse
remain unkindled?
[ remised ]
•
Once too little—
now too late.
( has grown too late. )

So,
let the best
Super-Hero(ine)
annihilate.

•
[ finished. ]

{ Take #2 }

Although,
just one single
unheeded remittal
deemed too insignificant
until interim had dwindled
now wide-eyed
from hindsight
acknowledging (transmittal)



-beyond noncommittal-
until interim's transmittal
[ until interim had dwindled ]
found idle & dwindled
[ docilely ]
any chance toward a repass/
can this recourse
remain unkindled?
[ remised ]