You're the end to all words to express my love. (fullstop)
But do we ever talk, with eyes so set on- one another? (we must see the words)
Do we strongly love the other, as the other thinks of- themselves? I often see a chance for more, (just add a comma)
You're not one to take my breath, or steal my heart, But how could I not exclaim- at my ears hearing your voice! (setting myself as an exclamation mark)
So I'd only question- whether the words and expressions, Are far too much? (I'm open to your suggestions)