Lawrence Hall Mhall46184@aol.com https://hellopoetry.com/lawrence-hall/ poeticdrivel.blogspot.com
He Never Met a Phor He Didn’t Like
He never met a phor he didn’t like Where the dead are always spinning in their graves A discarded cup looks like a war zone And poems are unpacked instead of read
Or hyperbole ‘WAY OVER THE TOP!!!!!!!!!!!! ***! ***! ***! OH!!!!!!!! MY LIFE HAS BEEN CHANGED FOREVER!!!!!!!!!! NO ONE HAS EVER SUFFERED AS MUCH AS I!!!!!!!!
And freighted his lines with adverbs in rank Until they really actually literally sank
Metaphors, hyperbole, and adverbs seldom help communicate ideas.