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She took my niece

She took my niece,

Made her, her-daughter.

 

Two of them sippin' coffee

In yoga clothes,

Watching sun-rising over the bay @

7:00am, on a Sabbath-Saturday.

 

She took my niece,

Made her, her-daughter.

 

Life, a puzzle, a jig saw dance,

Just found, right now, the right spot,

As I espied them, this poem,

Product of a momentary glance.

 

Another poem, another piece,

When,

She took my niece,

Made her into Her-Daughter.

 

 

7:02am

 

August 24th 2013

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Written by
nat-lipstadt
99 / M / NYC/Lippstadt/Kraków
Published
Aug 24, 2013
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In actuality, I wooed my woman early on, fifth date perhaps, when I took them both to dinner, knowing full well, tween them would be, love at first sight, "spoke not a word" that night, cause I knew,

It was me who was getting lucky.

Women, so easy to read.

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