I bring you the book the one I have read every day of my life
you translate it into Aramaic then back into English and say it is very nice. _____
I cook for you the food that sustains me and offer to share it with you
you discard the food and eat the bowl you seem to enjoy it? _____
I take you out for a walk in the yard that is my life
you stare the whole time at the grave I am trying to walk away from. ______
I offer to you in my cupped hands the flame that is my love
you put the fire out and say thank goodness that crisis has been averted. ______
We sit beside each other and smile and nod trying to decide if this is enough.
A few years ago there was a pretty funny tweet about a song that had been translated into Aramaic and then back into English. The end result was fairly formal and elegant, which was completely different from the original song, though the two versions essentially said the same thing.