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Jul 2013
slowly ever slowly
the old site operates
the person who runs it
should bring it up to date
other sites work far faster
and more efficiently
these are the sorts of sites
which so pleasure thee
the turn over of responses
at the site is so slow
it is truly a tired
and worn out old show
a little smartening up
along with some rejigging
would have the old place
traveling with a five star rating
the operator of the site
is falling well behind the pack
he should get the upgrading
and modernization on track
those who've visited the site
in the last month or two
cannot stand the waiting period
in its long queue
Elizabeth Squires
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Elizabeth Squires
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