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Tana Young
Poems
Jul 2013
"Deeper and Deeper." The Ocean Whispered
My eyes shoot open
I'm in shock, I'm frozen
I'm in the middle of the ocean
Swim keep afloat
But water is slithering into my throat
I feel like I'm going to explode
I keep getting deeper and deeper, I'm like a sinking boat
I'm at the bottom of the ocean floor
My eyes are still open my heart is still beating, I want to feel the shore
I try to swim up
But it feels like rocks are in my stomach
So I sit let the fish feed
Then I begin to bleed
I see the sharks coming
My heart is drumming
No one could have stopped the overflowΒ Β
The only thing that exist in my heart is the ocean floor
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Tana Young
26/Colorado
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