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What's bitter yet beautiful?

by bianca-e-rangel

I have never ran,  or burned beyond any safe haven, And your wit was lonely at times In lost ripped things Which in the end, forgot me. Because  I cannot return out of spite You're afraid   And you've striven Although I myself have finished You braved always strong by strong And myself? I acted. (And resurfaced, screaming because I loved) Her wispy memories And your wistfulness drowned me at times But I still remembered and stood Lost, and very much torn As the wonderful  fought The tainted forgot Always reaching Because nothing Which we are Blurred at the edges And it continues breaking when you're gone Your heart is hardened But I can still cry Because whose really the one who is aloud to be called strong? I listened to you with a  giving heart Even though at times what you said was  foreign, And you laughed, clever and bitter With each slur of the tongue (I do not wish anymore.) What is it about you that reached and understood; everything and nothing Not the stains of your heart in all its  lonesome But still it continued to be full of everything frightening. You're still so high, and it's dark up there isn't it?
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bianca-e-rangel
American
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Written by
bianca-e-rangel
American
Published
Jun 1, 2013
Time
3m
Notes

I tried one of those mad lib poem things, where you enter a bunch of adjectives and verbs and all that.

This is what came up.

I tweaked it of course and made it flow better.

I really like how it came out.

It's confusing, and at times sounds like I have no idea what I'm talking about.

But that's love isn't it?

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