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efni
Poems
Apr 2020
my biggest critic
you read my poem
out loud, to me
and it was awful
words i carefully pieced together
transformed to an inept mess
coming from your mouth
my stomach turned inside out
as my familiar, finicky stanzas
became clumsy strangers
i almost wanted to cover my ears
to escape my art that began to
sound like amateurish trash
however, there was not one ounce
of mockery in your tone
as you recited my poetry
you were quite impressed
but it was awful because
you read my poem
to my biggest critic
29.04.20
i've been my biggest critic, persecuter and bully for as long as i can remember. one day, i hope i can learn to be content with myself.
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