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TheGirlYouThoughtYouKnew
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Mar 2020
GOING BEYOND THE VEIL
Beyond the veil is a place to marvel,
where a dream can find a place.
With columns made from marble,
it´s like a slap to the face.
With pleasure as far as the eye can see,
and little nooks to behold.
A wonderous land of make-believe,
And where our minds and hearts never grow old.
I would like some feedback for this one please, it´s the first rhyming poem I´ve written
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