Jul 2019
My own thoughts
Filling me, I founder
Pushing me backwards
They Hit me like a thunder
My own thoughts
Laid down on a pile
And I went their under
Griped me from my collar
Dragged me, I surrender
My own thoughts
Are getting ample thicker
Lightening up my darkness
Shining muddy flicker
My own thoughts
Planned my tiny murther
Heaved the ground bellow my feet
And i can fall no further
Filling me, I founder
Pushing me backwards
They Hit me like a thunder
My own thoughts
Laid down on a pile
And I went their under
Griped me from my collar
Dragged me, I surrender
My own thoughts
Are getting ample thicker
Lightening up my darkness
Shining muddy flicker
My own thoughts
Planned my tiny murther
Heaved the ground bellow my feet
And i can fall no further
I would love to hear your feedbacks, please comment doesn’t matter if you didn’t like it , just write down which part you didn’t like and whuch things you think that i need to improve in my poetry!!!
Thank you very much in advance
Thank you very much in advance
