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Patricia Drake
Poems
Feb 2013
Contemplating Original Sin - A Journey in Haiku Structures
Peaceful lush garden
Man and woman innocence
Naively content
Woman unnoticed
Wanders the garden alone
Serpent slithers in
Provocative snake
Challenging teasing reptile
Promising insight
Words of seduction
Spider web weaving forked tongue
Beware of his fangs!
Magnificent tree
The centre of the garden
A fruit is missing
Sweet rush of sugar
Instant awareness of self
No more innocence
Man wakes from slumber
Woman is hiding the snake
But the serpent bites
Venomous passion
Serpent's words linger in dreams
Vibrant images
Woman blunders once
Secrets revealed in silence
Tears repress anger
Fruit offered as truce
Passion shared beyond the dawn
Fruit still forbidden
Man suddenly saw
A snake's tail around her thigh
Was passion a lie?
Slithering away
The serpent had done his task
He was satisfied
Spoken violence
Darkness swallowed the garden
Knowledge was hurtful
Garden gates closed
Knowledge cannot be erased
Cherubs remind them
Woman remembers
blissfully lucid words
And the taste of fruit
Infinite sadness
Knowledge demands reflection
She cannot go back
Written by
Patricia Drake
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