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Clouds

Some call depression

an ever-present cloud

Residing in the sky above

sad and dark and storm-ridden

Blocking the sun and

emptying its rain

so cold and wet

 

No

Suspended in the air

Clouds cannot touch you

They cannot reach out

after you have broken free

and claw you back

Talons of pain

digging into your gut while

the foul stench of its breath

seeps into your pores

eating away your inside

 

No

It is not a cloud

Clouds do not touch you

Clouds do not crush you

beneath a monstrous weight

threatening to break the legs

that keep you standing

******* the strength

out of every muscle

so you cannot move

let alone run

to escape

 

No

It is not a cloud

Clouds do not touch you

Clouds do not crush you

Clouds do not haunt you

They do not sink their fangs

into your exposed neck

Releasing a powerful venom

into your veins

invading your mind with

thoughts and images that

poison your soul

Chaining you to its world of

terror and darkness

 

No

It is not a cloud

Clouds do not touch you

Clouds do not crush you

Clouds do not haunt you

Clouds do not blind you

They do not spit in your eyes

a black tar that is

thick with despair and

dark with sorrow

Coating your sight with

a filth that blinds you

from beauty and

all that is good

 

No

It is not a cloud

It is a monster that preys

on the strong and weak alike

It is a monster that hides

in the shadows unnoticed

Slowly eating the light

until there is none left

It is a monster that leaves

you with little hope

of making it out

Alive

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