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Dec 2012
Trying to write a poem while on a train
I was sitting on a train with my pad and a pen, trying to write a poem. I had no title, but I had written down the first line
...I was sitting on a train with my pad...
A man sat opposite me.
After a minute or so of scanning his paper and throwing cursory looks in my direction
he enquiried "What are you writing?"
"I'm trying to write a poem about a man trying to write a poem on a train
who gets asked by a stranger 'what are you writing'.
"Can I be in it?", asked the stranger opposite.
"You already are", I replied.
The train pulled out of the station.
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