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The hurting tree (a tanka)

The hurting tree writhes See the ivy all around Its mistakes they bind You may not see as I do There is life if you look close

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24 / F / Singapore

Published: Oct 31, 2018
LinesWords: 527

Notes: Trying my hand at a 5-7-5-7-7 syllabus, enjoy!
Tags: #tanka #nature #cheerup #feelings #wednesday #blues #life

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