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PICNIC IN A FORGOTTEN CLEARING

by gary-brocks

We spread our blanket on uneven ground, bodies embracing in descent,                                They lay on the boxcar floor,                         fingers twisted, clutching slats. Transfixed by the spell of evening, limbs entwined, interlaced,                         Barbed wire punctured palms                         faces creased as in old photographs. We stretched in dawn’s light, poured coffee out of cups, and left as it merged with the dust.                          Bones upheave ground                          unsheathed fingers                            clotted with soil. Copyright © 2003 Gary Brocks
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Written by
gary-brocks
M / New York, NY
For You?
Written by
gary-brocks
M / New York, NY
Published
Aug 28, 2018
Time
1m
Notes

180828F -> 241118 In process

At the time of writing, the war in former Yugoslavia was occurring. Pictures of ethnic extermination camps, barbed write, mass graves, Happeing again. Happening despite the awareness and vows after the holocaust, that such things must never be allowed to happen again. An awareness that had grown stale. Do the horrors of history, even in our ignorance or innocence, ultimately make even the smallest of our acts, some how complicit?

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