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Dr Peter Lim
Poems
Aug 2018
Untying
Untying
lighter I do feel
in my pocket there's nothing
empty from head to heel-
let others do their shouldering
layer upon layer to peel
ambitionless all I do is dreaming
in contention with none to deal.
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Dr Peter Lim
M/Victoria, Australia
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