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May 2018
How wonderful it would be to die?
To fall into oblivion,
No feelings, no more pain, not one lie
Nothing forever more,
I'd be motionless, emotionless, and just die,
Nothing leaving me sore,
No one could bother me for there I would lie,
Oh wouldn't it just be wonderful to die?

But how would I do it?
Depends, how quick or slow,
Do I want my family to know?
Do I want to feel,
Is it to be a big deal?

I could jump in front of a train,
I wouldn't feel a thing,
The opposite to now,
Or could slash my throat,
Maybe write a lil note,
Or hang myself,
Or jump from a high,

Whos cares so long as I die.
And a few may ask why?
Why am i so eager to go?
Truth is really I don't know,
But this is something I must try,
It might just allow me to fly,
Wouldn't it be wonderful to die?...
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Written by
Josh  17/M/England
(17/M/England)   
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