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May 2018
Forget the cosy tale
its 3 in the morning
your a street artist,
no lines, no direction

only you, and the crowd
scary huh!

not everyone walks
the stage, so make
a scene and craft
slick approval

the adrenaline
brush fluffs up dizziness
coping on your feet
take a bow, listen
applause.
I have tried to leave out direct images, metaphors to some extent and the regular beat to achieve a baldness. I guess narrative - the cosy tale - avoids a harshness of disappointment. What do you think?
Written by
Patrick140707
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