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Oct 2012
The                      Gods                             are                   jubilantly            treading                  today

Gods                     and                         Nymphs                dance,                 freely               everywhere

are                     Nymphs                    whispers                  silent                     on                  wind

jubilantly            dance,                        silent                       leaves                deepest              wishes

treading              freely                            on                        deepest               desire                  for        

today               everywhere                     wind                     wishes                   for                    peace
This is my first attempt at a square stanza. It's a bit rough, but over all I'm pleased with the outcome. Constructive criticism would be appreciated!
Lauren Miller
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Lauren Miller
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