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Alice in ....... Wonderland?

Eyes of blue oceans

Hair of blonde silk

She fell because she was broken

She couldn't make up her mind

And she was running out of time

The pressure on her shoulders

Pushed her through that hole

It was An escape from her reality

To another

The rabbit chased the wind

While she shouted to him

She was lost in a world that

Couldn't be real

But her fingertips defied

Solid and warm

The trees bark seemed to breath

Everything there was alive

In the corner of her eye little eyes look

At her curiosity, yet unease

Is she the one?

Little voice squeaks

Be quite she'll hear you!

Another one

What could this strange place be

The trees were taller than any

The grass and flowers , many

The small rivers and streams all around her

Could this be a dream?

A voice echoes , like it's lost in a cave

But suddenly her body hurts

A scream from her lungs

And suddenly she's flung

And the pursuer yells,

"off with her head !"

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Written by
katlyn-orthman
21 / F / American
Published
Oct 2, 2012
Lines·Words
34·175
Notes

I wrote thus thinking about how when life throws you surprises they can seem so awesome and beautiful at first until everything goes wrong, not always the case but most the time , I guess it depends on the persons luck

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