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Dee Nore
Poems
Feb 2018
Sun & The Planets
Like the Sun, that surrounded by Planets
The warm effect that gives comfort
Without realizing, The Planets speed to surround it increases
Wheter the Sun is not realizing his effects
or is he just happy to be surrounded?
lol idk what did i do
#sun
#planets
#surround
#badenglish
#amateur
Written by
Dee Nore
20/F/Jakarta, Indonesia
(20/F/Jakarta, Indonesia)
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