Prescriptions got me sentenced These needles are my penance My life’s contained in a vial Body’s stuck in denial Can’t bear to spare a drop Little beads of blood that drip Symptoms that need to stop Belonephobia, loosened grip Vision fades in an out Staggered just for a sec Soon to find that little bout Did worse than to break my neck …My vile… …My life in a pile My life all over the floor in broken shards.
I feel like I could have pressed harder on the prison symbolism... Maybe, "Body's stuck at trial" instead... and maybe even something about the sentence/prescription being life long... Thoughts?