cliche, boring, bland and weak based upon a foundation of chic pseudo-intellectual
you distract from your lack with your apathetic crap entomology and intonation i call it character *******
you do it too often, many of you just be who you are so we can shine through
i just have to get this off my chest... your subject matter concerns love who would've guessed
it rhymes and chimes and deliverance isn't best and if one skims just beginning and end there is no need for the rest
lacking originality either resolve or contradiction not cryptic nor a riddle in sight not an original thought nor display of risk
you can learn here from this one write what you could never tell east from west and even though, you'll be better so it will never be as clever as thee so just hide behind your traditional text
its not that i seek to pick on the weak its quite the contrary-
start over with command so you understand it is the fraudulent that i detest
it is lack of interest and tact and i won't take it back your technique is as the rest.
you slack in approach you couldn't hold my attention from the first line to the next
no captivation no eccentricity no enigma flooding, you are, a pest
parasitic in your relentlessness attention seeking for all the wrong reasons leading poetry to its death
you bore me truly insincerely yours, unafraid to best.