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Oct 2017
early spring
on the hospital table
paper flowers

Written by
Marta Chocilowska
This is an intriguing haiku that brings thoughts and feelings of our own individual experiences of birth, death and everything in_between. The imagery is handled with a light touch and the obvious seasonal connection helps to bring a natural setting against what could be the stark, cold white setting of a hospital. We can feel uplifted by the splashes color and the promise of renewal and hope.

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The Sick Red Carnation
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