Andrew was a rather dreamy 8-year-old boy of average intelligence. I had explained what syllables are, and given examples, then asked the kids to write a short poem with 1,2,3,4,5,4,3,2,1 syllables, to make a diamond shape. Several of them didn't get it, and counted words instead, or just made the lines look the right shape. This was Andrew's effort.
Please little man sing me a song the sweetest song that has ever been with a harp or a fiddle. Sing a song about the beautiful princess or the sad puppet or the thunder giant. Sing me a song.
Would any of you have told him he had it wrong? He had started off with an idea of the shape, but then the poetry had taken over. I told him it was a brilliant poem - because it was - and not to worry about the syllables.