We were the transient children windswept youth marching to break the barrier between nightness and dawn whispering immigrant secrets of our fathers and mothers
lying on rooftops yelling arrays of stars speeding away racing light racing racing racing hearts as we crawled down fire escapes to street corners to proselytize
Amen Hari Krishna Namaste As-SalΔmu 'Alaykum silent God
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