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****** Intellectual

Clash. Zap. Thunderclap.

Orbitals charged with electricity collide - feels like  crossing the streams

let's - smash atoms like Adam and Eve,

pierce fiercely with particles blown white hot from my accelerator

Insatiable

Like  trying to fill up a black hole, so i accelerate her

excite her, ignite her, my touch lights her on fire

combust.

a cloud of ecstasy like Co2  rises higher

I've got my eyes on your ions

take a picture it'll last longer?

snap a photo digitize her

particles turned pixels tilt their head skyward

transcendant enlightenment, released it inside her

E=mc^2 , i can please you at the speed of light

we just rewrote the big bang theory and this time we got it right

opposites attract and charged sparks fly

we might not touch but ion be ****** if we don't try

I'm a ****** intellectual

I love your body AND your mind.

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Written by
LuminUmbra
American
Published
Apr 5, 2012
Lines·Words
20·149
Notes

This is definitley meant to be read aloud, in the style of rap and/or spoken word.

comments and critique much appreciated, this one has me quite enthralled, perhaps pun intended ;}

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