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Dec 2016
My heart stops

You are so sure of what you say
Why are you making me pay?
When did you stop loving me?
I want to know the day

I'm Sinking

I have never felt so alone
We used to share a home
I want to to know what you were thinking
You wont even answer your phone

I'm Sinking ever deeper

What do I have left
My life is a mess
I pray for the reaper
Or at least a little rest

She is Sinking

He woos me with his Charm
How could any one do him harm
I love what he's thinking
In his arms I am sinking
**** what the **** does the last line mean, I forget my own narrative of my poem. Is this poem from a girls perspective or a guys perspective. I think its from a guys prospective and his ex is with her new lover but any ones guess is as good as mine. (LATER) ok so this is really bothering me, I am about to edit some thing to make it make sense in the way I want to it to now but I now I think that the last line if from a new girl who is with the narrator. I am big on punchy endings so I know this ending is probably punchy some how but in what way who knows.
Eric Martin
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Eric Martin  Canada
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