You are so sure of what you say Why are you making me pay? When did you stop loving me? I want to know the day
I'm Sinking
I have never felt so alone We used to share a home I want to to know what you were thinking You wont even answer your phone
I'm Sinking ever deeper
What do I have left My life is a mess I pray for the reaper Or at least a little rest
She is Sinking
He woos me with his Charm How could any one do him harm I love what he's thinking In his arms I am sinking
**** what the **** does the last line mean, I forget my own narrative of my poem. Is this poem from a girls perspective or a guys perspective. I think its from a guys prospective and his ex is with her new lover but any ones guess is as good as mine. (LATER) ok so this is really bothering me, I am about to edit some thing to make it make sense in the way I want to it to now but I now I think that the last line if from a new girl who is with the narrator. I am big on punchy endings so I know this ending is probably punchy some how but in what way who knows.