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Tasman Suitor
Poems
Nov 2016
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Today was my greatest accomplishment,
An achievement round which I rally
And yet you're another absentee.
I drank from the pool of triumphs sweet,
Bitter as you would not share with me
For instead you're another absentee
Do not mistake their value is rare to me
But it seems anΒ incomplete victory
Without you,
Absentee
After having climed and descended mt. Bogong. There is phone signal at the top and it was a moment I shared, but not with everyone I wish I could have
#loss
#grief
#missing
#achievement
#sharing
#accomplishment
#absentee
#bogong
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Tasman Suitor
Melbourne, Australia
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