Today was our anniversary It took me 3 and a half hours to come up with the best outfit My hair and nails was looking its best He took me out to dinner 5-star restaurant A table already reserved Glass cups, wine Classic time Then we went to the club He bought me a couple of drinks A bit too many But I didn't drink them all He got wasted We went to his house He once told me that he would stay loyal to me But as soon as we walked in He broke his promise In the end, i walked out of his house with blood and a broken bottle in my hands My last words to him were I told you not to touch
To All Reader: I ask of you to give me you critiques on my poems. I want to become a better poet, and i need to know what i need to work on.