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Nov 2016
Today was our anniversary
It took me 3 and a half hours to come up with the best outfit
My hair and nails was looking its best
He took me out to dinner
5-star restaurant
A table already reserved
Glass cups, wine
Classic time
Then we went to the club
He bought me a couple of drinks
A bit too many
But I didn't drink them all
He got wasted
We went to his house
He once told me that he would stay loyal to me
But as soon as we walked in
He broke his promise
In the end, i walked out of his house with blood and a broken bottle in my hands
My last words to him were
I told you not to touch
To All Reader:
I ask of you to give me you critiques on my poems. I want to become a better poet, and i need to know what i need to work on.
NoFucksGiven
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NoFucksGiven  19/F/Statesboro,GA
(19/F/Statesboro,GA)   
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