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a girl, not yet beautiful

by rapunzoll

a hybrid soul, one to blend like watercolour paintworks into the social canvas, boys would stare, at the star, gone dying, who knew spotlights illuminate the pretty parts, the hips and the mannequin calves. until the sun dimmers, like gods dipped lantern burnt out, and bodies are stripped like birds of their feathers, plucked to glaring scars and worn out faces peer into the mirror - who is the ugliest of them all. they called her by names, prettier than her own, until she trembled into the valley of the dolls, a dark and dismal place with discarded arms and legs, to build the perfect 'woman' - a vulnerable creature, made to be loved, to be wanted.
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Written by
rapunzoll
English
Published
Oct 3, 2016
Time
2m
Notes

There's so soo so much pressure to be perfect. I feel like sometimes I should be trying harder but I'm already putting in so much.

Anyway, I haven't posted anything in what? 2 months? So many drafts, yet not enough free time.

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