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Adonistic Beliefs

"I" My mind The creator Of unachievable Adonistic beliefs Goes hammer and tongs As an angry blacksmith Fragmenting further What was once Beautiful Innocent Whole
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Written by
timothy-ward
22 / M
Published
Oct 1, 2016
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12·25
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Humility is such a rare element. The campus and surfer communities are so full of chest pounding ego pumping Neanderthals I often wonder if they ever started innocent too?!! Of course they did!

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#humble#homo#sapien
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